Hi,
I have uploaded "Pro Bono Publico" which is a piece I would like to send around, but I would like to get it a bit more polished first. So, if you have a few minutes, I would greatly appreciate it if you would read and let me know of any weaknesses, typos, omissions, gaps, overstatements, understatements or general wishy-washy ness that grabs your attention.
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/24082.asp
Many thanks,
Gaius