Just Man.
Man errupted and corrupted
fullfiled pages of history told
only he who invented sword
in his hands pretends to defend
but evil pushed him to offend

Deism and unknown are no way
fellowers,technology is our abey
in which distances are reduced
to become one spot in univers
even nature becomes his subway
Inventions made world a tree
where branches raise high free
what sweet fruits she gives!

A bad worm fissured to feed
no choice to avoid she bleed
we fear one day there is no seed
collective hope we must feel indeed
Man is first and last real shade
whatever was his blood and creed

Can, you'll get a better response if you post your writing in the Archive or join a group, as the Forum is really for discussion of writing related issues.

hell ANNA
thank you so much for your answer.
well I tried to submit to the archieve but I do not know how to do that because I m new to the site , would you please me give me intructions to do that.thank you very much

Hi- yes, to upload work, go to 'My WriteWords, which should be in the top right hand corner of your screen when you log in. Then click on 'Upload Work' and then select Poetry when it asks you to, then cut n paste your poem in. Or to join a group, try Poetry IV- click on Groups, go to Poetry IV, then click on 'Click here to join this group' and all should work. Hopefully!

THANK YOU AGAIN ANNA
I tried this time and I hope it works out.thank you for help

Can, I have made a comment on your site, hopefully others may follow. I think that, as Anna suggests, one of the Poetry Groups would be very helpful to you should you decide to join.
Len

thank dear friend .so i would like to join the group but i do not know how even when i followed what anna told me but unfortunately it did not work out.have a nice day
kader