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by optimist at 23:28 on 01 August 2009

Hi

I've written a near future science fiction story - if anyone has time to take a look before say teatime tomorrow - no pressure - I'd be very grateful...

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/23784.asp

Sarah

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Re: new story
by Ben Yezir at 15:45 on 13 August 2009

Hi Sarah, I like - however I PERSONALLY have a huge problem with the present tense. I know, very old fashioned. Nice work though.

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Re: new story
by optimist at 21:36 on 15 August 2009

Thanks for reading, Ben - I appreciate the comment.

I'm rather into present tense at the moment (sorry - appalling pun not intended) but I know it isn't for everyone

Sarah

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