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new ending for editor
by optimist at 15:47 on 18 July 2009

I was asked to change the ending for this one - it feels a bit tacked on but I can't go mad as I should probably stick near the original word count.

If anyone has time to take a look - appreciated!

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/23725.asp

Sarah

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Re: new ending for editor
by NMott at 16:32 on 18 July 2009

I've left a comment, but I'm not sure it'll be any help.

- NaomiM

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Re: new ending for editor
by optimist at 20:28 on 18 July 2009

Thanks Naomi - you are a star

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