Hi all,

Thanks to the very helpful feedback I've recieved, the old chapters III and IV of Majidun have been merged to create chapter III with an all new ending.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/7603.asp

Thanks in advance for any comments.



Harry

P.S. If you've read before it's really only the end that has changed, so please don't feel you have to trawl through it all again!