Writing a novel is a much more complex undertaking than I'd imagined, but a challanging one all the same. The structure is becoming a little clearer in my mind, but the actual writing is a messy business. I've uploaded the ending I envisage for the first section of the novel. It covers the night following the opening day and it's slightly out of sequence. I have to think of a bridging passage to make the whole section complete. Even so, I'd appreciate any comments on it. It's still a little rough, but I've been accused (justifiably) of being too much of a perfectionist, so I thought I'd try it this way. Hit me.

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