Hi Folks,

I've been reworking my novel and I've redone the beginning, re-writing and expanding it, hopefully incorporating some of the criticism I received from WriteWord members last time around. I'd really be grateful for anyone taking the time to get stuck in to it again, although I appreciate it's quite a bit longer than the last version. I'm particularly interested in any opinions you might have regarding pace, whether you think it's too fast or slow etc;

Thanks Much
FX

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/7574.asp

FX,

Have commented on what is emerging as a first-class and well-written work.

Len