Thanks for your comments. I've revised chapter one but still don't know if Dr. Scott-Roussaux comes across as a stereotypical loony! I've also added what may or may not be chapter two. Any comments more than welcome!
Sue

Sue,
I'll have a look and let you know if your revisions do anything for me.
Len

Thanks Len. I'd appreciate it!
Sue

Sue,

Have read and have commented...suggest that others might well have a look... it's developing very nicely.

Len

sue

will take a look today

andrea