This is an amended version from the "I'm New Here" post. It's shortened down to make it easier.

Basically I've written a series of TV shows that I am interested in turning into a TV show, but I'd like the advice of other writers to see how I can improve it.

It's story based around the superhero genre but set in UK. It's called The Adventures of Dragonia and it's sort of based around Buffy The Vampire Slayer. I'm a huge fan of comic book heroes like Spider man and Batman so I wanted to try and do a series based around that idea. I've sent scripts off to companies, but have been told to seek proffesion help before I continue, hopefully I will find some help her.

Below is a link to the first episode of my series. Any help I can get would be appreciated.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/7499.asp

Thanks to Insane Bartender and Anna Reynolds for helping me with this site. Hopefully I can get to grips with it soon!