I've just popped my 2nd piece on here.

I notice it was quite a lot to read, and the little red warning message came up to say that people may not read it as it was too long ... this made me laugh because if this is the ONLY reason people won't read it, I would be very happy indeed.

I've got a feeling people will hate it and that's why they won't read it! I like the idea of having a hateful character, but I guess you run the risk that people will dislike them so much, that they won't care to read on.

Therefore, I've tried to shift the rest of the book around so that the reader gets involved with another part of the story. You need to read it really to understand this ramble!

The content is quite risqué. It’s a modern romance, so there are lots of bits that may be inappropriate for the faint hearted!

SJ

I'm off to read this now