I have just submitted. It's really quite long. A poetic epic, if you will, but it's hard to keep up mementum all that time, so if it starts to lag anywhere, just shout. Also the ending may be a bit of a cop-out, and lazy on my part, so shout about that too. It rhymes again so, needless to say, shout also if any of that falls down, though I haven't always stuck a pattern.

Thanks!

James

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