This is about a third of the way through now.

If you wouldn't mind taking a look at it, whether for the first time or as a repeat reader, I am at this point especially interested in comments on pacing (is it sagging, getting bogged in detail, or is it too fast?) as well as any thing that strikes you along the way.

Plus, MC has been named Kate. I'm thinking about cjamhing her name to 'Becky'. What do you think?

Ani