Hi,

well I've decided to take the bull by the horns and submit the first 800 words of a short story which is sort of aviation related. It's not yet finished but I think I need some constructive criticism before I finish this piece.
Regards,
writersblock

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PS. 'Hungarian Misadventure' can be found under 'writersblock' in the writers' archive - sorry if l'm stating the obvious.