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Running (2nd Draft)
by PeterOC at 08:18 on 13 November 2004

Hi,

After some helpful advice from WW readers, I've tried to make this story a bit clearer. But has it worked?

Any comments or thoughts are welcome.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/7262.asp

Cheers,

Pete

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