Yup, I've finally taken the plunge and attempted some prose....its a Prologue to an idea I have for something longer which may or may not come off.
I'd really welcome any comments and helpful hints as I am such a novice and know no tricks of the trade at all.
I suppose what I'd like to know is if you read it, would you be tempted to try the next page?

Gosh, this is scary! I feel like a duck in a fairground shooting gallery!! Be gentle with me!
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So that's were you were. Thought you'd gone a bit quiet, there tc. I'll catch up with it later.
Elspeth

Cheers Elspeth. I'll look forward to your views, (I think! ;0 )
Already had some feeedback with has pinpointed places I need to tweak/clarify - thanks IB, Sion.
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tc

Excellent tc. I'm taking a break from the site (can't you tell!) but will have a look.

Good for you!!!

Sue
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I would have been more fondly disposed to reading this if you had named the work, or included a link. I found it eventually when I scanned through all your work and found the one down the very bottom with prologue in the title.

Anyway, off to have a read and will post feedback.

Ian


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hi, ooh, didn't meant to sound so curmudgeonly there, have read and posted, cheers, Ian

A link! Now there's a thing. Why didn't I think of that?

The Symmetry of Dreams


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