Hi to everyone!

I've recently joined the site and have posted my first piece of writing, now I am (nervously) hoping for some feedback... the anticipation is a bit like viewing a horror film through the gaps in your fingers.... ouch! but here goes...

http://www.writewords.org.uk/groups/show_article.asp?group_id=68&article_id=22612

thanks to all in advance of your time

kind regards
Debra

Hi Debra, and welcome to WW

I see you're already getting busy commenting on other people's work - that's always a good way to attract feedback on your own.

Good luck with your writing. If you need any help around the site, just shout up.

Dee