Hi everyone,
I'm new here and would appreciate any criticism of my work that you'd care to give.
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/6876.asp
Thanks!
Erin

Erin,

Isn't it interesting that from the first two comments you have received, one likes your work a great deal and the other is honest enough to give you a thumbs down.

I am sure this says a lot for the style and impact of your writing; this, to me, underlines the point I made about 'being commercial'... where interest in your work may be reflected by polarised camps of opinions, ensuring wider publicity and thereby arousing greater market interest.

Len

Len,
You are very kind, turning a negative review of my work into something potentially positive!! I'm not worried if some people don't like it, though, I labelled it quite clearly "Women's" fiction, and thus know that it's not everyone's cup of tea.
Thanks again for your support,
Erin

Hi Erin,

I tried to look at your piece, but you have limited it to group members only, which restricts the amount of feedback it can receive.

Ani

Hi Ani,
Sorry about that, I can't seem to change anything about it as I'm only on a trial membership!
Thanks for trying,
Erin

Ani,

I'm not a member of any Group and I had no problems. Don't ask me how or why. All this technology confuses me - I just press the keys.
Len