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  • The Winter House - Chapter Twenty-three
    by Dee at 13:51 on 17 October 2004
    Just uploaded now. Find out what poleaxed Fynn at the police station...

    Any comments will be most welcome. Meanwhile, I'm off to the Archive to do some reading at last.

    Cheers
    Dee
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  • Re: The Winter House - Chapter Twenty-three
    by Dee at 08:33 on 21 October 2004
    I've just added a section (marked @@@@@ at either end) to make the transition before the final scene less abrupt.

    Does it work?

    Dee
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