I don’t expect anyone to trawl through all of this again, but I thought I’d put the whole thing up in one go now it’s more or less finished.

There are amendments all the way through, but the main changes are a new section during the dinner party at the start (between the @@@@@@s) and the final section (from the %%%%%%), which has not been posted before.

I wonder if the ending seems too rushed with the big time jumps?


http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/6790.asp
Sharon

Sharon, I'll read the end bit tonight, then read the whole thing at my leisure. Well done for finishing it.
Elspeth