I have revised the prologue and chapters 1 -3 of my childrens horror - Vloekneville.
Vloekenville
Vloekenville chapters 2&3
And I have now uploaded new chapters -
Vloekenville chapters 4&5

I would love to get any feedback at all, either on the revised versions, or on the new chapters, plus any fresh comments from anyone who hasn't read any of it before...

Thanks,

Derek.

I hope those links work...the preview function seems to be knackered...

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Yep the links worked...wey hey... Be great to get any comments, good or bad, especially on the last two chapters...they're only tiny little chapters...honest.