This Thing is a new story that I have uploaded.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/6680.asp

Have a read and tell me what you think. I appreciate any advice and comments so don't be shy.

Also I would love to have a bit more feedback on the previous story I uploaded called 'Necromancy'.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/6471.asp

Many thanks,

Peter

Since I posted this NOBODY new has commented on either of the works above. I guess a career in marketing isn't for me. But seriously, I need feedback, any comments good or bad are always appreciated.

Peter, I was just browsing the forum and saw this.

I'd be happy to read. It's late now...but I will as soon as I get chance (I'll be sod all use to you but ... .

Derek.

Bear with us Peter, it has been a busy start to the month! Have just commented.
Elspeth

Sorry! I wasn't actually having a hissy fit. But I kind of looks like it now that I re-read it. In your own time, you know... when you get a minute... if you wouldn't mind...