HI - I have just posted my first attempt of work...

Trading their white bread world of safety, corporate suits, town house with central heating and lifelong friends they bundled their boys into the car, drugged the cats and starved the dogs to drive into a life adventure in the South of France

Arriving at their new home, (an abandoned mill with no roof and adjoining cottage with no heat, water or electricity) and with little knowledge of the French language – let alone the mentality of wild camels, or indeed the local farming fraternity, the Bird family's dream hit brutal reality within days.

Please read on as I would really welcome comments on this.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/21687.asp

Thank you for reading

www.camelsinfrance.eu