Would love some critical feedback on a play I am uploading in installments. It's working title is "Two One Act Plays Linked By A Mango" (catchy - not!) and there are currently two installments (kinda half of the first act) uploaded.

I have written for theatre before, but always adaptations. This time I'm going for an original piece.

It's a two hander - the first act is a monologue and the second is the same character and her mother. It is literally still being written - haven't even finished Act One yet - so all your thoughts and opinions of what works and what doesn't work will be really valuable to me.

It's wriiten as a comedy but with very dark undertones that willbecome quite gritty and emotional.

Please let me know what you think!

Lisa