That's pronounced Corothal & Deshiray, by the way.

Ah! I've ony just discovered this forum. Right. I'll keep an eye on it.

I've just posted the Prologue & Ch 1 of the young adult Victorian-set Gothic horror I've been slaving on all year. I have previously posted that section, but have substantially revised. I'm going to be posting subsequent chapters quite rapidly (and noting something Dee said (hi Dee!) deleting previously posted ones from my archive.

This is the final draft (eek!) so I really would be very grateful for any comments.

Take care
Andrea

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Corozal&Dexire

Andrea,

Don't get rid of earlier chapters too quickly. I am sure there are many Members who would like to read the earlier chapters after they come across or read your work at a 'later' date. You can 'hide' them from non-Members. It is sometimes essential when one reads a Chapter to refer back to earlier Chapters in order to appreciate the 'progress' of a book and its quality of writing.

I've had a quick read through and it is quite compelling. I shall comment on your site later.

Len