The next chapter of Terrestrial is up. There’s a summary at the start for anyone who hasn’t read any of the previous ones (or if you have, but you’re totally confused about what’s going on )

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/6543.asp

This is his recovery after waking up in the bushes. Does it explain what happened clearly? Too much exposition? Is enough happening here?

All comments, of any kind whatsoever, welcome.

Sharon