Hello, I'm a relatively new writer, attempting my first novel, here's the first draft of the first chapter, completely open to constructive critisism, please feel free to read and comment!

Thanks

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/21466.asp

Hi Brum and welcome to WriteWords
The site's a bit quiet at the mo, what with summer hols and everything, & I'm off too for a few days, but I'll take a look when I'm back.
Meanwhile, if you have any questions just ask.


- NaomiM

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Had a quick look now and posted my first impressions.