Hello everyone,

I am a very nervous trial member who's just uploaded her first piece of writing to the Poetry II group. It's a really short poem that I picked because I feel it's representative of my writing generally - including all the flaws. I'd really appreciate some feedback not just for the sake of the poem, but also to get a fell for how writewords works as a community before deciding whether to join as a full member or not.

It's called 'Ends'. Please go and have a look an let me know your thoughts.

Thank you! F