For those of you who have already read this I thought I should let you konw that I have revised it by adding a chorus.
The song/lyric has been going around in my head since I worte it and it seemd to be lacking soemthing and I think the chorus is it perhaps you would all be kind enough to let me know what you think


thank you to those of you who have already commented and to those of you who are about to

take care

david