What would you do if this happened to you? What would you do if you were the first one on the scene, the only one on the scene?

Chapter 33 of FPG, written in a matter of minutes please tear it to pieces, I haven't got a fcuk what I've done with the tenses!

Geoff

Sharon,

Thanks for your comment on this one, it's always great to hear that people like my stuff. Just wondering if you expand on your comment to tighten the third para.

Cheers

Geoff

Dee,

Thanks for the comments and that keen eagle eye of yours.

If, and when I get it published you can have a copy free

Geoff

I'll hold you to that, Geoff - so long as it's autographed and handed over in person with a mocha...