Hi
I am new to this site and have been having a good read of everyone's work and the detailed feedback it has received from members. It is quite daunting to post my own and await valuable feedback but here goes. I have started writing a children' novel about Fruit and another about Cats. I would be grateful if you would be able to look at either or both and give me an idea as to which you think is best.

Thank-you in anticipation.
JoJo