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Flying High
by Account Closed at 09:21 on 17 August 2004

Hello everyone,
I've posted the very short opening to my new novel. Please let me know what you think. Does it work? Is it interesting? Should I give up before I start?
Thank you
An uncertain Elspeth

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Re: Flying High
by Anna Reynolds at 13:52 on 18 August 2004

Elspeth, where is it, what's it called? can you add a link to this forum thread please and then we eager readers can... read it?

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Re: Flying High
by Account Closed at 15:53 on 18 August 2004

Sorry, Anna, I'm not very good at these things. Try this

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/6048.asp

Elspeth

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Re: Flying High
by Account Closed at 06:54 on 19 August 2004

Second part now up:

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/6082.asp

Any comments about POV?

Thank you
Elspeth

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