Hi, I'd be grateful of some feedback on my short 'Jean Puts Her Foot Down' if anyone's got a minute to spare, before I start sending it out to prospective buyers...

Thanks

Beverley

Hi Beverley

I was just about to have a look at your film- where's it gone?? have you taken it away? I do hope not.. unless you've had a fantastic offer..

Hi Anna, yes I took it away because no one seemed interested and it became a bit embarrassing, all those hits and no replies.

Anyway maybe it's a sign that I should stop procrastinating on this site and just get on with the writing.

Cheers!

Beverley

Beverly,

I'm confused. I gave you rather positive feedback on 'Jean puts her foot down' both in the comments section and personally via email.

I thought others had too.

...so, hmmm? I'm going through a surreal moment now.

Perhaps David can help. May be things got deleted by the 'system'?

Yes you did Jibunessa and I'm very grateful for your comments but I just needed to hear other writers thoughts, critisizms, rants and raves and unfortunately that didn't happpen, time of year I suppose... Never mind, I'm working on something else now so I'll just put my script to bed and learn a little lesson. Thank you once again for taking the time to read it!

As ever

Beverley x

Well- maybe procrastination is a bad thing, but I'd like the chance to have a look/respond to your film, so if you want to upload it again....

Beverley do please put your stuff back online - it was one of the highlights of the film section!

I think too many random things go on here (and on any internet site) to guarantee comments in what was only a week or two that your piece was online - look at all the great books on Amazon that are still unreviewed - there's a lot of chance involved.

Stick it back up and you'll be sure to get some reviews in the very near future - hey, I've got my hands on the visitor numbers, I know what I'm talking about

Bless :-)

so glad you've re-uploaded it-- I had a chance to read/comment on it via Archive/Group. Lovely!

I forgot to say, Beverley, a few weeks back, my accountant, of all people, stopped by the site and said he got totally engrossed in 'Jean..' - proof that many people may have read and enjoyed in the past. Anyway, thanks for putting it back online!