Hi all, I'm rewriting my epic 'The Rose Lane Musical Society' now called 'When the last little star has left the sky'. I'd really appreaciate any thoughts on the new chapter one which is quite a departure from the original. So if anyone fancies it and has the time that would be great.

Cheers and a happy summer

Julie
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Hello, have to say I prefer the new title, somehow the previous made me think of that 'Good Ole days' programme that haunted me as a child, rather like the 'clitheroe kid' on a Sunday on the radio..rambling down bad memory lane now ..sorry. You know, I didn't get the chance to read it all, as it was already off and away when I started reading novel type stuff, but one scene has always stuck in my head and being so true, so real..hope it's still there!

Elsx

Glad you prefer the new title Elsie, I was going to call it 'On a Bright Cloud of Music' but Elspeth yelped in disgust and put me right off.