Sadly, my last chapter didn't raise any interest, so I've uploaded this one - simply because it was there - and if it's still no good I'll bin it.

P J, it can be a bit random whether you get any critting for things that are in the general archive: it's such big, busy site that most people tend to concentrate on the critting relationships that they develop in the groups. Is the Crime & Thrillers group full? Or even Comedy?

Emma

Yes, do join groups, P.J. - not everyone remembers to look in the main archive every day, and pieces slip down the list very quickly - it certainly doesn't mean it was no good.

Thanks, Emma and Caro, for the kind words. I will take your advice with my next upload. Can I join more than one?

Can I join more than one?

Yes you can, but don't forget, the more groups you join, the more reciprocal critting there will be.


- NaomiM