Hallo all

I'm new here, and I've just uploaded a radio play -- I'd love some c&c, as it needs a bit of spit and polish to make it shine.

It's aimed at the sort of people who like the brass-and-polished wood look of His Dark Materials, Jules Verne and HG Wells (but it's a lot lighter than all of those!)

Travels with a Tick-tock

Looking forward to hearing your comments.

Clare

Clare,
i didn't want you to think that no one had got back to you! A warm welcome to WW. People tend to post up to 2,500 words for a crit. Would it be possible to select 10 pages or so in the first instance that you'd like critiqued and i'll do my best, although new to radio
Best,
Antarctic
PS Love your blog!

Thanks for the advice and the interest, Antarctic. I've put up the first few scenes -- just 10 pages to start off with. I don't know very many radio writers, so I'd love to see some of your work.

Glad you like my blog.

It's not exactly my forte, I'm afraid, but I'm happy to give it a go I'll WW you tomorrow or Thursday.

Hi

I've just joined the community - and am exclusively interested in radio plays. Haven't got one accepted yet but have had favourable response from BBC and script doctors for the 5/6? I've submitted. I've just printed your play out for a read - hopefully over the next week or two and will report back. Like the synopsis/sell at beginning.

Vanessa

btw Did you know yr real name is on the title page of doc?