I know a lot of people read my script ‘Barstools and Locals’ and they had a lot of helpful and interesting things to say about it too.

I thought you might be interested to know I have been working on the rewrite and have completed the beginning of the alterations. I have also changed the name of the script and I decided to call it ‘Come Again Please’ because the phrase ties in with the story but it also reflects the naughtiness of the script with its double innuendo

Thanks

Scott