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The Terror on The Tell, chapter one by darkmir

Spoof detective with no title
by P.J. at 21:08 on 14 January 2008

Hello everyone
I've just uploaded the first bit of a new story that I've been toying with for some time. It was meant for YT but now I'm not so sure. What do you think?

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Re: Spoof detective with no title
by MarlaD at 14:45 on 23 January 2008

Love your style!
Apart from the odd missed word it flows really well. I love smiling when I read..more, please x

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Re: Spoof detective with no title
by P.J. at 16:38 on 23 January 2008

Thanks for those kind words. Do you think it would appeal to YT?

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Re: Spoof detective with no title
by MarlaD at 15:25 on 25 January 2008

I don't know..I'd read it & I'm 36 x

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