Scary, pompous title. But I like it, and those who are not rendered instantly comatose by the prose may eventually forgive me for using it. It's my 2nd novel, not a short story so those of you who stay along for the ride, I thank you a millionfold in advance.
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Edited Prologue, Chpt 1 and new Chpt 2 of Somnimb....soumnomb....sumnab...somnabea...that thing that I wrote...
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I've just (fundamentally) edited the prologue as well as and 1 and 2 and would really appreciate any opinions as to whether this has actually improved the piece.