Hi everyone.

I have just uploaded the first chapter of my current work,
Freelands
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/19531.asp

It will be my second novel. I am about half way through writing at moment (about 40K in total so far)
I have sent my first novel to Cornerstones Litrary Consulatncy and await their report.
In the mean time, I would love to hear anyones comments on this work.

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Second Chapt: http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/19548.asp