Login   Sign Up 



 
Random Read




  • `Scars Beneath The Skin` - amended Chapter One uploaded
    by hopper2607 at 23:21 on 14 November 2007
    Hi,

    Thanks to Lammi, lastubbs, Steerpike's_sister, susieangela and RT104 for the comments on the version uploaded 21/10/07. I’ve now uploaded an amended version. I’ve tried to keep all the good bits and remove all the bad bits commented on. The results can be seen at:

    http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/19444.asp

    For anyone who wants to play ‘Compare and contrast’ or ‘Spot The Difference’ the original version is at:

    http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/19242.asp

    Hopefully I’ve not thrown the baby out with the bathwater. You be the judge.

    Andy