Continuing my serialised novel 'I Was A Teenage Antichrist'.

I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! (How very cliche )

Comments appreciated!

JB

Thanks to Dee and Sharon for your comments, and for sticking with me. I'm going to catch up with Terrestrial and The Winter House while I'm abroad. I have slightly revised the tale now, just the points you made, and it's still here if anyone else would like to comment.

JB

Have a great jollie, James. I think you've earned it!

Dee
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Thnaks Dee. I'm refreshing this for the last time as it is still open for further comments. The piece does almost stand as a stand alone piece, so don't worry if you haven't read the preceeding chapters.

I really appreciate your time.

JB

Hi,

I read it and I really enjoyed it. Seemed original and bizarre, just the way I like it. I have not seen any of the other chapters as I dont have access but I look forward to the next one. I guess it vaguely reminded me of Dark Omens, by Gaiman and Pratchet, but only because of the anti-christ character.

Regards,

Rich

You mean Good Omens

No, it's nothing like that story. Basically, though I kind of enjoyed the book, I couldn't help but feel they'd wasted a really good idea on abstract sillyness with a ridiculous plot and unbelievable characters. Don't get me wrong, I love Gaiman, but I didn't feel it was his best.

JB

Oops, yes, Good Omens, ahem. Dark Omens was a Playstation game.