http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/5080.asp

That magical cake, with it's perfect pink and yearnful yellow, the wonderous cake glue, all wrapped in delicious marzipan.

And from my obsession with this cake, came this tale.

I'd really appreciate any views on it, especially if you saw it beofre today's rewrite.

Is it because I didn't say please?

Well please take a look, and let me know what you think.

;o)