'lo folks.

I've recently uploaded a new short story, on which comments would be gratefully received

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/18954.asp

Whilst I've stuck it in the 'homour' group it's not intended to be roll around on the floor laughing funny.

It's another piece of mine in which I like the idea, but am not sure I've delivered it in the right way - I feel I've got a little lost, not sure if I even have a style anymore,

anyway, hope those of you that are kind enough to read through enjoy it,

All the best,

Ben