Hi

For all those not following my novel (I know it can be tricky to follow them online), here's my latest horror story. I guess it's kind of a sequel, although it stands alone as well. I had fun with it, anyway, so forgive me if it's a little tongue-in-cheek.

I'm mainly concerned about the tenses at the end. Not sure if it should skip into present tense or not.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/18875.asp

Comments welcome.

JB