I've recently uploaded the prologue of a mystery novel I'm working on entitled 'Clearings' to the Crime and Thriller Writers' group. I can see that it needs more work but I'm less sure about exactly what is needed. It would be great to get some feedback and criticism, if you've got time.

Thanks
Biddy

Hi, Biddy. I've left a comment on your work - although, since I'm not a member of the Crime group it won't show up on the comments list down the RHS.

All the best with it

- NaomiM