If anyone is interested in looking at the second chapter of my untitled novel (first chapter is also in the archive), I'll be eternally grateful & also promise to make inept remarks about your own work.

Story so far: Giles has argument with wife, Sara, goes out and gets drunk, meets a girl, crashes into man walking home in dark lane. Now he's trying to put things right.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/18834.asp