While I'm revising my Chapter 3 endlessly, I decided to upload a girlfriend of mine's short story that she sent me yesterday. I like it. Let me/her know what you think.

Keba, the girl who wrote the story lives in NYC, and is attending Creative Writing Grad Program in the fall at Brooklyn College, with Academic Director Michael Cunningham(author of The Hours)
It took me a lot of convincing to have her let me post her story, so please lend some help and criticism where necessary. Thanks.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/5044.asp

-Adam