I've just uploaded Chapter 11 of this strange, dark tale. I hope you can find the time to read it and let me have your thoughts. I'd especially like to know if you think that this shift in PoV works.

Thanks in anticipation,

John

Hello Jumbs! Haven't seen you for ages n' ages, so just thought I'd pop in. How's things?
x
tc

I'm okay, thanks tc! How are you?

I expect you're limbering up for RLG6!!

But don't hang around here, get over there and read that damned novel I'm trying to write!!

No ... don't mean it really!!

Speak to you again soon

jam box xx

Actually, you know, I think I might..I'm trying to keep pace with Dee's new one, (already behind methinks), so I'll have a go!
Will it confuse you if everyone else is giving feedback on Ch 11 and I'm on Ch 1?
It will?
Excellent!
x
tc
But promise it's not scary? I don't do scary as my little woolly brain begins to wander late at night...

eek! whawasthat!!

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Ignore the fact that this was posted at lunchtime...poetic licence and all that...

Hey Jumbo, whatever you do, don’t tell tc that mine’s sssscary!

(in which nothing much happens except tc's head popping out from behind the sofa every so often)