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    by deyofthephoenix at 10:43 on 21 June 2007
    Greetings. I became a trial member yesterday and am sharing a few pieces by way of introduction. Poetry and creative non-fiction tend to be what I write, but I aspire to mixed genre work, actually. Thanks for reading, and many thanks for any responses about the poems.

    - Melissa

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    Would Bob Dillon Care?

    Would Bob Dillon care that a redhead sings his lyrics while strumming an acoustic guitar, accompanied by a dulcimer and banjo?
    Would he care that she is young and wears a dress of flowers?
    Would he care that she feels the sense of the song?

    What happened to Bob Dillon who sang political songs and now sings for iPod?
    Is his an inevitable end? Does celebrity spend a son like that?

    Would Bob Dillon care that we sit here mesmerized by her fingers, pale and strumming?

    I suppose,
    probably not.

    ***
    Hope in May

    mallards
    pruned fruit trees
    evergreen sapling
    marks the septic tank corner

    many trees she says to me
    yeah my silent divergence
    slim trunks planted
    after murders of forests

    a man fishes the Grand
    underneath a bridge
    facing north
    shaded by concrete

    puddles spot fields
    freshly tilled
    I wish I walked the land
    before leaving

    but I will go upon return
    where hope buds green

    ***

    Definitions of Gudgeon

    1.a small freshwater fish used as bait

    Stepfather battered smelt once a year,
    and served them whole, bones and guts crunched
    on Idyl Crest Drive in Ingham County, landlocked,
    no lake-effect snow reaching our lawn,
    our sandbox far from dunes
    lapped by freshwater.

    I am from the Great Lakes state
    but not raised on swimmers captured
    with or without licenses,
    so scales did not line our kitchen sink
    or stink up our backyard along the shed
    where abandoned vegetables rotted.


    2.a credulous person

    Incredible how credulous I have been
    like gullible guppies minding their own biz
    in a dank creek soaked by spring.
    But how does naivety get sacrificed?
    Playful pricks rip spawning salmon,
    nets snag fins for industry,
    these irreverent sticks dip riverbeds.
    So, I trust the innocent, not well-cast lines.


    3.a dupe

    A dupe smudges fudge across dungeon walls
    as Gideon and Simeon bludgeon earthworms,
    indifferent smashed bodies that once tilled the soil
    not for humanity but just functioning
    in their scheme, except for when used for bait.


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