The first two chapters are uploaded now. This is a work in progress so I could do with lots of help. It still has some very large chunks missing towards the end which I’m pretty vague about. I’m hoping that feedback from you in the early chapters will help to clarify my mind.

Hope you enjoy it.

Dee
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Blimey Dee I'm only on Chapter 24 of Paying for the Gallery! You're far too prolific for my liking

I will read it soon, but still grappling with Lewis' flimsy grasp on his temper!

Regards

Dav

Just uploaded C3. Seriously not sure about this chapter - does it work? Does it shock?? Do you want to read on???

Really need your help here, folks...

Dee
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Hi Dee. Hope you had a nice weekend. I'll take a look at this tomorrow and make a few comments

JB x

C4 is up now... hope you enjoy it. The feedback I've had so far from the first three chapters have been excellent.

Please keep it coming!

Dee

Chapter six is up now.

All comments will be more than welcome and appreciated.

Dee
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Chapter seven is up now. Does it work? Or do you think I could expand it a little? I’m not sure, so would appreciate all the help I can get.

Cheers

Dee